the person most impotant for me

¿who is the person that you admire? my mom, she is the person most important for me, because when i was a child she always cared for me, indespain that i didn´t have a father, my mom was working very hard everydays for i have everything i need.
I remember when my mom do not had job ,she was beginning in a family house for i can to end my high school ,i am very grateful with her.
my mother is a person nice,humble, funny and hard-working ,everybody tell me that i am a person very lucky because i have a mom very special, i belive so.
my mother is beautiful,she is middle measures ,she has black long hair and her brow ayes and small nose.

myself presentation

hello, my name is Carlos Mario Villa, l am nineteen years old, l was born in Sao Paulo Brazil on 1988, but l´m colombian. The members of my family are: My brother Jorge, who is a school teacher and he's twenty-five years old. My sister Diana is a student in high school and she's sixteen years old. l live with my mother her name is martha, she´s a teacher and my father is a mechanic. My grands- parents live in Popayan-Cauca, my grand-father Francisco is a filosopher and my grand-mother is a house wife. l have one uncle, his name is Oscar and he lives in another country, he has one child who is my cousin Jossselin, she lives in Bogotá. I don't have a lot relatives.
I am a foreign languages student at the Univesity of valle in Cali. In the afternoon l go to study in the music center, l play the guitar and the bass. In the week-end l work installing equipped airs and also l work doing keys and opening cars and door houses.
My favorite band is Motorhead because l think they are the best musicians. I also travel around the country because l love the nature. l like to do music and because of that, l formed a band on 2007 with some friends.
Every day l come at the university in bike because l like to ride it,but when it rains l come in bus.

teacher this is the correction the written production
He is Felipe Hoyos, he is eighteen years old he studies at the university del valle , he was born in 1990 he is studying languages he has one brother , she studies at the univesity valle too.
Felipe lives with his mother, they live across from 14 calima in the neighborhood calima.
he likes dance,play video games .Everyday he studys in the morning ,he is studying languages and in the afternoom he studys topographic technology .Felipe´s father does not live with him, he lives in the United States .
Felipe has short hair,he has brown eyes, big lips and small nose, as for personality, he is good person and humble too,he is very good student .
His oncle lives in vijes and aunt lives in Cali .He likes rock music and he likes beer , his favorite band is cold play and the favority movie is (three hundred) I belive that he had pest, but i am not sure.
he has many friends , has a gilrfriend very pretty but, i dont know her name, she has red long hair and she has green ayes, his best friends is diana she studys administration of companies .
the felipe´s dream is a travel around world, he wants to visit france